Star Trek XI -- "Clueless"

[writers_island]

for karmic_fic, prompt: lemon drops and/or Vulcan handporn with oblivious!Kirk

Clueless | PG-13 | 130 words | complete

Three chocolate martinis and Spock is leaning against Jim’s shoulder, and Jim counts the night as a success. He’s been trying to loosen up his awesome-but-uptight First for years.

“What are you drinking, Jim?”

“Lemon drops.” Jim picks up one of the shot glasses, licks the sugar on the rim, and tosses it back. “Girly drink, I know, but I like them.”

He lifts another glass, but hot fingers wrap around his own. “May I?” Spock asks. Spock’s fingers slide over Jim’s as the shot glass switches hands, and Jim gulps as he watches Spock swallow.

Their fingers brush again as Spock hands him the glass, and Jim swears Spock’s doing it on purpose. Spock gives him a look that is almost a smile, and Jim knows he’s missing something.

Feedback is better than chocolate.

Comments

[zagethe.livejournal.com]

Oh, I can easily see this scene play out further.... more?

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

Possibly. I have a backlog to deal with first.

[openedbook.livejournal.com]

Seconds on more!!!!

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

It's on the list. :D

[angels3.livejournal.com]

Sneaky Vulcan!

I loved it.

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

Sneaky, drunk Vulcan. :D

[karmic-fic.livejournal.com]

oh my god! lemon drops AND secret kisses!!!!! thank you so much and WELL DONE YOU!!!!!.... and of course i have to agree that more is always welcome.... but what's awesome about this (besides everything) is that you did such an amazing job of creating a complete scene in so few words.... much harder to do then people seem to think
*additional squee*

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

Yay! I'm so glad you like it.

[treehouse-kid.livejournal.com]

lol, Loved it. A very sneaky Vulan!

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

Thank you for reading!